Wednesday, May 28, 2014

Hint Fiction: The Visitors


They were quiet, their business done quickly, but something woke the geek girl, Reffie.

"Thank goodness that was only a dream!" 


Ah, a story within a story, leaving you wanting more.  Hint Fiction prompted by Jayne.  This blog has been ignored too long.  Join us and go see what the others have done over at Jayne's blog.



14 comments:

Michelle said...

I have missed hearing from you :) Sounds like something fun is going on. I will check it out. Too bad I leave for 10 days tomorrow. Look forward to more posts from you and cat!

injaynesworld said...

Thanks for joining in, RG. I have those "Thank God it was only a dream" moments all the time!

Nicky said...

Hmmm... I must be doing something wrong. I wish I had those "TGIOAD" moments more often. ;-)

S.A. Molteni said...

A wonderful story within a story. Very good. :-)

nonamedufus said...

You've piqued my interest, Ref. I want to know more about this quick business.

Cheryl said...

Oddly enough, even knowing that this was only a dream, I'm still wondering what happened when the geek girl was awakened. There's a real feeling of foreboding in that short sentence. Really well done, Reffie.

Britton Swingler said...

Dreams...aren't they just amazing sometimes. I wonder what happened in hers. Hmmmmmmm.....

steph said...

So she thinks it was a dream, but it wasn't. Some business was transacted... that's what I got. I like it. Open to interpretation. I want to know what went on while she slept.

http://howtobecomeacatladywithoutthecats.blogspot.com said...

Evil twin was at work while you were asleep!

laughingmom said...

Nicely done! I must know more.

Lauren Salkin said...

I'm glad you woke up. But did you really?

Nora Blithe said...

Wasn't that a fun challenge?

Katherine said...

That was completely and absolutely intriguing!!! More more! :)

Rob-bear said...

Sounds entirely too frightening!

Blessings and Bear hugs, especially now, and tonight!


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